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Post by JJD lover on Apr 8, 2004 9:36:51 GMT -5
Right someone starts of a story and writes a small paragraph. Then someone else carries on and then someone else and so on and so on. The same person can write as many times as they want but not straight after they have already written. Does anyone want to try it? Who wants to start. I will if you want but i need time to think of an opener so i'll leave it to someone else if you want for the time being. Plz try it it should be funny as it can be serious or stupid what ever!
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Post by Mz on Apr 9, 2004 10:03:12 GMT -5
I'll join in, but i haven't got time right now. Later on i'll add or start. Whatever. RPGs are fun cos they normally beomce stupid and hilarious.
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Post by zoienjulianrule on Apr 11, 2004 5:31:51 GMT -5
i was going 2 suggest that over on the royal forum but didnt know if it was silly but i will do it! the only thing is that i have not been watching hb as long and im not as in 2 it as tr and most of u guys does that matter?
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Post by JJD lover on Apr 11, 2004 7:43:38 GMT -5
no course not i just cant think how to start!
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Post by Sandra on Apr 11, 2004 7:55:31 GMT -5
How about starting with a title then it can be used as a base for the storyline
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Post by JJD lover on Apr 11, 2004 8:06:06 GMT -5
okay erm sensible or silly?
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Post by Sandra on Apr 11, 2004 8:14:59 GMT -5
Anything - as people will think of different ways the story could go from the same title
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Post by zoienjulianrule on Apr 11, 2004 8:49:46 GMT -5
yeh
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Post by Mz on Apr 11, 2004 10:11:34 GMT -5
What about 'Falling Forward'? It could be about falling in love, or falling flat on your face, or spiralling into depression, or something. Just as a suggestion.
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Post by Spy_Master on Apr 11, 2004 12:53:58 GMT -5
I've played that game at this club I joined and just 4 a laugh I'll start it off
Title: Crash and Burn
Thinking back many now realise that that day was doomed from the very beginning. There are always small clues telling you that the day is doomed but you never realise, never learn from your mistake. The day like all of the other doomed days, started off too good to be true. At The Royal the day had been quiet, almost to quiet, no emergancies and barely and patients. It had also been an abnormally quiet day at Ashfordly Police station, there hadn't even been any speeding tickets. That was all going to change. It all started with an inbound boeing 747. "Mayday, mayday!" The pilot of the 747 hailed. "We have an emergancy, requesting immeadiate landing clearance!" "Rodger Bravo India 747. We hear your mayday. Permission granted." The air traffic controller paused briefly "What is your emergancy?" "We've lost number 1 and 3 engines and number 2 is on 40%" the co-pilot replied, the pilot was busy with the plane. "Rodger thankyou Bravo India 747. Emergancy crews will meet you on the ground." "Rodger." came the terse reply, there wasn't time for anything else because a second later they lost number 2 engine completely. Number 1 engine suddenly had to power the whole plane, it wasn't up to it so it cut out too and all the pilots attempts to restart it failed. The plane began plummeting toward the ground.
This is a story that I've been playing around with, I have more but I kind of got stuck and so I'm submitting my forst paragraph with one alteration I've added Ashfordly Police Station into it so it can be either HB or TR or both. Enjoy. Spy_Master100880
P.S. If no-one likes this one I'll think of something else
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Post by zoienjulianrule on Apr 11, 2004 13:19:05 GMT -5
kk il try the next bit
the plane plumetted to the ground all the passengers screamed and bang!!! it exploded. it was on fire and everyone tried to escape but it was no use some people were trapped inside luckily the plane had landed in a field just outside of ashfodly so someone quickly dialed to the royal and ashfodly police station for help.......
'good morning The Royal,'said lizzie the receptionist down the phone.
'hello?! Quick we need an ambulence and help there has been a plane crash and an explosion we need urgent help!'
'ok we'll be as quick as we can....'
soon the ambulence was on its way with gordon Jill and meryl all aboard as the accident seemed serious so they needed lots of help. also going to the scene was dennis merton and Phill belomy so they could see exactly what happened.
'Thank god you are here!' a lady named cheryl cried as meryl got out of the ambulence 'the casulties are over here'-she pointed to the smoking plane wreakage the doctors and nurse quickly got to work on patients, who had been rescued from the plane by firemen while they waited for the policemen to arrive to ask the witnesses questions.
'can you hear me?' Jill asked one of the patients.........
back at the royal Jeff was talking to samantha about their date when they went surfing, and how much fun it was---- he knew samantha could surf if she put her mind to it!
'so when can we do it again?' asked samantha
just then Lizzie came up to them
'Samantha the plane crash is very serious and dr Ormarod wants more help, can you please come with me to the hospital van so Alun can takre you there?thanks'
'ok look Jeff i have to go it was nice talking see you soon'
with that she rushed off to the van so she could help Meryl,Jill and gordon
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Post by JJD lover on Apr 11, 2004 15:08:59 GMT -5
have you not already done a story called crash and burn?
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Post by JJD lover on Apr 11, 2004 15:20:35 GMT -5
Just at the same time there was a call to ashfordly police station. Alf answered. "Yes?" pause. "Okay we'll be straight over." Alf turned to steve, dennis and phil who by this time knew something was wrong. He told them about the plane crash. "Come on, lets go," called dennis grabbing his jacket. "Alf you stay here. Man the phones and call for more assistance." Just as they stepped outside Liz turned up. "Whats up steve?" she asked. He told her. "you better come aswel."
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Post by zoienjulianrule on Apr 11, 2004 15:29:30 GMT -5
liz steve and dennis rushed to their cars and bike, they quickly drove to the scene of the plane crash to meet Jill Gordon and Meryl--they hoped that the crash was not too serious, but their hopes were shattered as they arrived at the area
they could still see the plane on fire but luckily some casulties had been rescued ,and were either being worked on by the two doctors and meryl, or were being calmed down by Samantha, if their damage was not too great. Dennis walked over to Samantha to see if any of her patients were up to talking about what happened when the plane crashed.....
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Post by Spy_Master on Apr 12, 2004 12:09:52 GMT -5
no I well I've done part of it but I got kind of stuck so I'm donating it as I can't do it anymore.
Oh by the way I think u shoulod read what the person b4 u wrote because Dennis and co seem 2 have gone 2 the crash site twice.
I'll give the next bit a go.
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"No Seargent Merton I really don't think that any of them are up 2 talking right now, the ones that could talk are in shock. Tomorrow maybe." Samantha replied, standing her ground, she understood that this needed investigating but the welfare of her patients came first. One of her patients groaned and reached into his pocket with his one good arm, the other one had lost the hand, and withdrew a notebook. With the handless arm he gestured to Seargent Merton violently, croacking and clearly trying to get his attention. Ignoring Samantha Dennis knelt besode the man and took the notebook from him, noting at the same time that where the arm stopped and where the hand should have begun was very cleanly cut, well crashes didn't have to make sense. He opened it and out fell a sheet of note paper. It had come from the American Embassy, it detailed this mans mission orders. He was to take a briefcase back to America, the briefcase contained, Sergeant Merton closed his eyes and cursed whatever madman had issued these orders. The briefcase contained a nuclear bomb recently seized from a terrorist group. This wasn't happening.
You can trust me but er this was where it was heading in the first place only well I never know how 2 put things. Keep going and don't ruin it, it's perfect the opening, just keep it going. lol only joking it's your story as much as mine do what you like lol, how much trouble are you guys gonna have. Spy_Master100880
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